im going to redo raphaelmyloves story from mikeys veiw
we enterd the ware-house donnies been blabbing about in the lair. i could tell he was worried about april with her wondering the roof top, waiting for us. we walk around, it was way to quiet i mean i heard music in my head it was that quiet. im wandering around next thing i know BAMMM right in my face. a foot ninja comes out of no where and im sent flying into some boxes. we beat the foot and guess what we find shredder waiting for us. so raph and leo gang up on him and me and donnie are there to back them up. he sends leo and raph flying across the room to some foot solders. he slaps me i go fling into a pile of boxes. i get out of the boxes and i see shredder about to take out donnie, he could not move with that gash in his leg. with out think,wich is my specialty XD, i jump in to save him. i feel a huge amount of pain and i feel my blood draining from me. he held me up and wrenched my are then e said"foot retreat i have no buissiness here" and some of his solders grab boxes ten they leave. i can see donnies face, i cluch my stomic as he says"mikey, mikey are you ok" i look into his eyes and his face drains some colour. uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhg this is takeing 4ever just read his story and figure out the rest and sorry for useing your story but that what toatle would have happened

Okay I will try with this story. Don's point of view.
We burst through the doors of the warehouse I tracked down earlier in the lair. I couldn't stop worrying about April. She is somewhere on a rooftop outside, waiting for us. The room was large, and suspiciously empty. We walked around silently, scoping for Foot. I turned the corner into a row of boxes. I walked a few feet when I heard a crash behind me. I spun around to see a ninja smashed into a box. I ran back into the opening and Raph was beating up two ninja. Farther in the corner Leo was cornered. I moved over to help him, but by the time I was halfway there he didn't need it any more. All of a sudden I felt a kick in my shell and I was propelled forward. When I got back up the ninja that kicked me was striking. I stopped his katana with my bo, and kicked him back. He smashed into more boxes and sunk. Out of the boxes fell guns. That must've been the shippment the Foot was here for. I heard the sound of clashing swords around me, but in an instant it stopped. He fell from the beams of the warehouse. The Shredder turned to face us. Raph was the closest to him, and they went out first. Leo jumped in, helping him with the Shredder. Mikey and I surrounded them, preventing the other ninja from interfering. The Shredder picked up Raph, and threw him into Leo. He turned to me and Mikey. I hit him with my bo, but his thick armor wasn't harmed. He backhanded me and I was shoved back. He struck at Mikey, but he dodged it, barely. I was now the closest to him, but my leg was hurt. He must have hit it when he hit me, because there was a huge gash in my thigh. I tried to scoot to where my bo was but I was too far away. I saw Raph and Leo, fighting together, but severley outnumbered. I lost sight of Mikey, but I didn't have time to look, as the Shredder was right infront of me.
"This is it" I thought. I couldn't move, I couldn't block. I saw him raise his arm. I closed my eyes. A few memories flashed through my head, but one in particular stood out:

Leo, Raph, Mikey and I were laying infront of the couch. I just finnished
hooking up new DVD player, and we put in this movie we found in the sewer.
Raph was on the far left, and he looked like he was going to fall asleep. We
aren't even half way through yet. I peeked over at Leo, he seemed to be paying
attention, but not as intently as Mikey was. He was on the edge of his blanket,
staring at the screen.
"He-He-He DIES! B-But...the poor litle lion!" Mikey was flipping out over
the scene. "No! It wasn't your fault! It's your uncle!" I couldn't help but smile.
We may not all get along, but we finally found something we could do together.

I heard a yell, which made me snap out of it. It sounded really close. I opened my eyes. I saw blood around me, but it wasn't mind. I found myself wondering why the Shredder didn't hit me. I looked up to see the Shredder, holding Mikey. He wrenched his arm back.
"Foot, retreat. I have no buisness here." The Foot grabbed a few of the boxes and disappeared. I crawled over to Mikey.
"Mikey! Mikey are you okay!" He looked up at me. He was on his knees, clutching his stomach. "Mikey!What did you do?!" He looked me straight in the eyes, and I felt my stomach flip over.
"I..I saved you Donny." A small smiled peeked in the corners of his mouth. "Now you can go get April, Donny." I felt a tear roll down my cheek. Raph and Leo were beside me. Raph leaned over Mikey.
"Raph. Do you hate me?" Mikey's voice was starting to crack.
"Of course not Mikey. How coulde I hate you? I never mean anything I say...I-I'm sorry." Raph broke out into full tears and sob. He hugged Mikey, and soon Leo and I joined in.
"Leo?" Mikey looked at Leo. He was still smiling.
"I hid you guy's mutation day present in my room under my mattress." Leo nodded to him. "Happy Mutation Day you guys. 16...we made it." Mikey, still smiling, closed his eyes for the last time.

When we left the warehouse, Raph was holing Mikey in his arms. April came running over.
"M-Mikey?" Leo shook his head. Tears filled her eyes, and she hugged me. I couldn't even think about the fact she was hugging me, I was too sad about Mikey. Mikey...saved me. April came home with us. When we got there, Raph laid Mikey on the couch, and April knelt next to him. Raph then disappeared down the hall. Master Splinter came in through the kitchen. He looked at us, then his eyes shifted over to the couch. Leo put his head down, but I couldn't help myself. I hugged Master, and cried into his chest.
"My son. My poor son." Splinter held me tight until Raph came back. He was holding a thin, rectangular package in his hand.
"Should we open it?" He came over to us. Leo and I nodded. We slowly opened it. Once we did, we were speechless. Inside was a painting of the five of us. Raph had his arm around Mikey in a playful position. I was standing next to them, holding somesort of technology remote. Leo was next to me, and he was smiling up at Master Splinter. He was standing the way he usually does. Smiling wide at his sons. The art was great, but I couldn't focus on that, I could only focus on the story behind it. "There's more." Raph was holding a piece of paper in his hand. He started to read it aloud:
"Guys. I love you so much. Even when we don't get along, which is a lot. Raph. You are the best big bro a guy could have. You may be mean to me sometimes, but I know it is just cause you're grumpy, and you don't really hate me, I hope. When we were kids, you were always my idol, and I expect you to be for the rest of my life. I love you." Raph's voice cracked, and he handed the note to Leo, and put his head in his hands. Leo continued:
"Leo. You always understood me. Even when you didn't. I know sometimes you can be hard on us, as the leader, but I know it is because you are trying to be the best one you can be. And it's all for us. Thank you Leo, I love you." Leo put his head down, and wiped his eyes. He handed the note to me to continue. I was afraid, but I read on.
"Donny. You are the all time smartest person I know. I can't believe April doesn't love you already. I know we are almost completely opposite (since I am not too smart) but I know you still love me for who I am. I am sorry for breaking all of those things I have in the past. I don't mean it...usually. Thank you for always forgiving me, I love you. Happy Mutation Day bros, love Michelangelo. Buyakashaw dudes." I looked at my brothers through my tear-blurred eyes, then walked over to Mikey's body, and said goodbye to my brother.

This is amazing! Way to capyure the whole Badass Mikey! I like the glint in his eye, cool!

MIKEY!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!~ Mikey can't die! I love him so much!!!!!*cries*
((Great job though!))

wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaahhhhhhWAHHAHHAHHHAHAJDKAKFLDGDIJFIJIFJD NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO MIKEY NONONONONONONONONONNLNONONOONONONOONONOFJVGCASFCFSAdfcggfcwegt WHY YOU GOTTA MAKE ME CRY

Awesome work.

But... Just... Mikey ;-; *Huggles Mikey* Dun die...

It must suck to have a dream in which Mikey gets killed... </3

Whoah! What's the story?

I love how you did Mikey's eyes.